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學測指考英文寫作 – The Blind Side (by 10^th grader)

[ 學生原作 ]

The Blind Side

Hunter Wang – the 10^th grader

Michael is a boy whose father was killed and led him roam on the streets.  He is very tall and big, so everyone calls him big Mike.  One night, he walked on the streets.  Anne’s car passed him.  Anne is a woman whose daughter is Michael’s schoolmate.  Anne decided to help him.  She brings Michael to her home, and lets him live in the house.  Anne helps Michael to solve his schoolwork problems, and his grades become better and better.  Anne finds that Michael is interested in sport and lets him become a football player.  At last, Michael becomes Anne’s family.

I think Anne is kind person.  If I saw Michael walk on the streets at night, I wouldn’t ask him what happen and bring him home.  But Anne did it.  Anne also fixes his heart scar.  The Blind Side is a good movie that everyone merits to watch.

[ 修改後 ] 

The Blind Side

Hunter Wang – the 10^th grader

The Blind Side is a real story all about a boy and a woman.  Michael is that boy whose father was killed when he was a kid.  His mother’s addiction to drugs made herself pay little attention to him, which led him to roam on the streets.  He is very tall and big when he becomes a teenager, so everyone calls him big Mike.  One night, he was walking on the streets while Anne’s car passed by him.  Anne is that kind and rich woman whose daughter is Michael’s schoolmate.  Due to sympathy, Anne decided to help him.  She brings Michael home, and lets him live with them.  In addition, she asks a tutor to help him with his schoolwork, which makes his grades at school become better and better.  In the meanwhile, Anne finds that Michael is interested in sport, so she asks the coach to train him to become a football player.  Before long, not only does Michael end up to be a good player at his school and Tennessee, but he also becomes a member of Anne’s family. 

I think Anne is a woman with a heart of gold.  If I saw Michael walk on the streets at night, I wouldn’t ask him what happened and bring him home.  But Anne does.  What’s more, she helps him soothe the pain of the scars in his heart.  The Blind Side is a really good movie worth watching.