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學測指考英文寫作– What's Wrong with My Computer (by 10^th grader)

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What's Wrong with My Computer

Hunter Wang – the 10^th grader

Ricky went to the game store to buy the video game. He saw a lot of games and he liked them very much. He just could buy one video game because he didn’t have enough money. After twenty minutes, he chose the video game that he likes most. He returned home as fast as he could. When he got home, the first thing that he did is turning on the computer. The computer didn’t work. He tried many times, but the computer still not work. He disassembled the computer to check the problem, but he couldn’t find the problem. He felt tired and sat on the chair. Suddenly, he found the problem. The problem that led him couldn’t turn on the computer was that he didn’t plug in the computer.

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What's Wrong with My Computer

Hunter Wang – the 10^th grader

Ricky went to the game store to buy a video game. He saw a lot of games and he liked them very much. However, he just could buy one because he didn’t have enough money. After twenty minutes, he chose the video game that he likes most. He returned home as fast as he could. When he got home, in order to play the game, the first thing that he did was to turn on the computer. But the computer didn’t work. He tried many times, and it still did not work. Then he disassembled and checked the computer. Even so, his work was in vain. While sitting on the chair feeling tired, it struck him that he didn’t plug in the computer. After the computer was plugged in, he played the game with a happy smile on his face.