學測指考英文寫作Friendship (by 12th grader)

 

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Friendship

Scott Huang – the 12th grader

 

Everyone will make many friends in their life. But how to keep a friendship is a big sense.

 

I think communicating and understanding other are both a important thing in friendship. If you don't communicate with your friends, you would not understand what your friends like or what your friends dislike. It will lead to a wrong interacting in each other. Thankful and apologize also are important

 

One time I had a conflict with my friend. But after communicate we realized that both of us had wrong. We apologized and we more understood each other, and became a best friend until now.

 

 

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Friendship

Scott Huang – the 12th grader

 

Everyone will make many friends in their life. But how to keep a good friendship is a big challenge.

 

I think both communicating with and understanding each other is important to maintain the friendship. If you don't communicate with your friends, you will not understand what your friends like or dislike. It will lead to a disconnection between you and your friends. Thanks for your friend's help and apologies for your doing wrong are important to maintain a long-lasting friendship as well.

 

At one time I had a conflict with one of my friends. But after a good communication, we realized that both of us might be wrong. We apologized to each other and became more considerate mutually. Since then we have been best friends.

 

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