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學測指考英文寫作 – Hit by a Basketball (by 11^th grader)

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Hit by a Basketball

Yo Yo Ke – the 11^th grader

Last Sunday morning, we had a basketball game with a friendly school. I had a good performance on the first half. When the third period began, a ball which wasn't passed to me well hit right on my face. It made me feel very faint and uncomfortable. One of my teammates came to hold me with his hands and volunteered to take me to the health station in the school. When we arrived at the station, I raised my head and the pretty nurse come into view. She asked me tendly where I got hurt. With her sweet smile, I didn't feel uncomfortable anymore and said, "I am okay now, but I need to stay here for a while."

[ 修改後 ]

Hit by a Basketball

Yo Yo Ke – the 11^th grader

Last Sunday morning, we had a basketball game with a friendly school. I had a good performance on the first half. When the third period began, a ball which wasn't passed to me well hit right on my face, which made me feel very faint and uncomfortable. One of my teammates came to hold me and volunteered to take me to the health station in the school. Upon being sent to the station, I raised my head and saw a pretty nurse coming to me. She asked me tenderly where I got hurt. On account of her sweet smile, I didn't feel uncomfortable anymore and said, "I am okay now, but I need to stay here for a while."