學測指考英文寫作– The Magic of Belle Isle (by 10th grader)

 

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The Magic of Belle Isle

Hunter Wang – the 10th grader

 

Monte is a man who lost his wife. He turns writer to drunk. In his nephew's advise, he moves to a place where calls beauty island. There is a woman who has three daughters that her name calls Charlotte lives next to him. Monte meets Charlotte second's daughter whose name call Finnegan. Monte starts to teach Finnegan how to write the story because Finnegan wants to be a writer. Because of Finnegan, Monte and O'Neil family are becoming familiar. Monte overcame heart scar and starts to write again. He writes a story about an elephant to beat Charlotte heart. Finally, he is success.

 

Finishing watching this movie I think Monte is a hardy person. He can overcome his scar by himself. If I was he, I wouldn't easy to overcome the scar by myself. The Magic of Belle Isle is a good movie that merits to see. This movie teaches us don't give up and get up from the silt.

 

 

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The Magic of Belle Isle

Hunter Wang – the 10th grader

 

Monte is a man who lost his wife. He turns himself from a writer to a drunk after his wife died. With his nephew's advice, he moves to a place called Beauty Island. There is a woman, Charlotte, who has three daughters, lives next to him. Because Finnegan, Charlotte's second daughter, want to be a writer, Monte starts to teach her how to write a story. From then on, Monte becomes familiar with O'Neil family. With friendship and love, Monte recovers from the alcoholism and psychic trauma due to being unable to write a good story, and starts to write stories again. The story about an elephant, which he writes for Finnegan, draws Charlotte's attention and wins her heart.

 

After watching this movie, I think Monte is a brave man, who can overcome the difficulties and soothe the pain by himself. If I were he, I wouldn't be so easy to overcome the sufferings by myself. The Magic of Belle Isle is a good movie worth watching. It teaches us to stand up and reach out to the people around, and not to let difficulties and sufferings beat us.

 

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