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學測指考英文寫作– Phubbing While Walking (by 9^th grader)

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Phubbing While Walking

Tammy Lai – the 9^th grader

I walked along the street and tried to use some functions of my cellphone which I bought it an hour ago. It was the latest version of cellphone. When I walked on the overpass, my cellphone rang. I quickly answered and said, "Who's calling?" "It's me, Alice. I heard that you bought a new cellphone, right?" "Yes, it has more functions than previous one! And its screen is a lot larger and clearer ..." Walking down the overpass, I was too excited to notice. But some water on the surface, I fell down seriously. I hold my cellphone so it didn't break, and I used it to call the ambulance to send me to the hospital. It was a horrible experience and I learned a lesson. Don't phub the cellphone while walking.

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Phubbing While Walking

Tammy Lai – the 9^th grader

I walked along the street and tried to use some functions of my cellphone which I bought an hour ago. It was the latest model of Apple's iPhone 6. On the overpass, my cellphone rang. I quickly answered and said, "Who's calling?" "It's me, Alice. I heard that you bought a new cellphone, right?" "Yes, it has more functions than my previous one! And its screen is a lot larger and clearer ..." Walking down the overpass, I was too excited to notice some water on the stairs going down. I slipped and fell down to the ground seriously. But I hold my cellphone tightly so it didn't break, and I used it to call the ambulance to send me to the hospital. It was a horrible experience and I learned a lesson - Don't phub the cellphone while walking.