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英文寫作 – Winter Is Coming

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Winter Is Coming

Helen Huang – the ninth grader

The weather is getting colder and colder now, and it means winter is coming. In the winter, there are some festivals, like Christmas and Chinese New Year. We can have a lot of fun in these two festivals. I like the Chinese New Year more than Christmas because I can get the money from the parents. And I sometimes used the money to buy some fireworks then found the corner to play with my brother. It was really interesting, so I like the winter best.

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Winter Is Coming

Helen Huang – the ninth grader

The weather is getting colder and colder now, which means winter is coming. In winter, there are some festivals like Christmas and Chinese New Year. We can have a lot of fun in these two festivals. I like Chinese New Year more than Christmas because I can get money from my parents. I sometimes used the money to buy some fireworks, and then my brother and I would shoot them off at a street-corner. It was really exciting, so I like winter best.