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學測指考英文寫作 – What Do I Hope to Have in My Senior High School   (by 12^th grader)

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What Do I Hope to Have in My Senior High School (by 12^th grader)

Thomas – 12^th grader

After graduating from junior high school, I started to think about what senior high school life would be like.  I didn’t want to be a student who can do nothing but studying.  Instead, I would like to lead a colorful high school life, join clubs, and make friends.  Also, I hoped to become a member of the badminton team in order to strengthen my body and enhance my skill of playing badminton.  After experiencing senior high school life for two years, I have a little bit different idea to the theme.  Terrific as my original thought was, I didn’t take the most important part – academic performance into account.  However, I gradually realized that the purpose of getting into high school is to acquire knowledge rather than only enjoy a carefree life.

When entering senior high school, I immediately joined the pop music club and the badminton team.  It seemed that my dream came true.  Nevertheless, I found it difficult to adapt in the pop music club, so I quit it after a semester and focused on playing badminton.  So hard did I practice that I won the city champion with my teammates, and we made friends with each other since we had the same goal of being the best players on the court.  Also, I studied hard to get better academic performance, which made me become a student I hope to be.

During these years in high school, I have definitely become more mature and knowledgeable.  I think that I make my dream come true, and I even enjoy a better life than I originally hoped to have.  

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What Do I Hope to Have in My Senior High School (by 12^th grader)

Thomas – 12^th grader

After graduating from junior high school, I started to think about what senior high school life would be like.  I didn’t want to be a student who can do nothing but studying.  Instead, I would like to lead a colorful high school life including joining clubs and making friends.  Also, I hoped to become a member of the badminton team in order to strengthen my body and enhance my skill of playing badminton.  After experiencing senior high school life for two years, I had a slightly different idea from what I had before.  Terrific as my original plan was, I didn’t take the most important part into account – academic performance.  However, rather than just enjoying a carefree life, I gradually realized that my primary purpose of getting into high school is to be responsible for myself and what I have done and to prepare for entering an ideal university in order to have the further study to acquire more knowledge about what I’ve been interested in – Mechanical Engineering.

Joining the pop music club and the badminton team, it seemed that my dream came true.  Nevertheless, I found it difficult to adapt to the pop music club, so I quit it after a semester and focused on playing badminton.  So hard had I practiced that I won the city championship with my teammates, and ever since we have become best friends for we have the same goal of being the best players on the court.  As I mention about my academic goal, I have studied hard to equipped myself with all major subjects to shoot for my promising future.

During more than 2 years in high school, I have gone to great lengths to be excellent at what I have learned and to become more mature, which is difficult and tough.  But it is rewarding and worth doing.