學測指考英文寫作 – A Kiss on a Frog (by 11th grader)
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A Kiss on a Frog
Yo Yo Ke – the 11th grader
A girl, named Polly, has a childish heart. She likes to read storybooks, which is her diversion. She often imagines that she is the princess in the story. One day, Polly took a walk around the lake. There were many frogs beside the lake. Suddenly, the girl remembered the story "Frog Prince". She wanted to imitate what happened in the story; that was to turn the frog into a prince. So she kissed a frog. But nobody predicted that the girl's mouth was infected by germs. Her mom took her to the hospital. Polly's mouth was serious that the doctor asked what happened to her. In order to ease Polly's pain suffering from the infection, however, her mom told the doctor what Polly did hours ago around the lake.
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A Kiss on a Frog
Yo Yo Ke – the 11th grader
A girl, named Polly, has a childish heart. She likes to read storybooks, which is her diversion. She often imagines that she is the princess in the story. One day, Polly took a walk around the lake where many frogs inhabited. Suddenly, the story "Frog Prince" struck her, which let her imitate what happened in the story; that was to turn the frog into the prince. So she kissed a frog to see whether a prince would come out. Waiting and waiting, nothing happened. As a result of the kiss, the girl's mouth was infected by germs, which made her lips tumid and itchy. Once she got home, she was hurried to the hospital by her mom. Polly's mouth was so serious that the doctor asked what happened to her. At the moment, she was too embarrassed to say anything. In order to ease Polly's pain suffering from the infection, however, her mom told the doctor what Polly did hours ago around the lake. Fortunately, after applying some ointments on her lips and taking medicine, Polly recovered from the infection in a few days.
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