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學測指考英文寫作– A Day in an Amusement Park (by 10^th grader)

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A Day in an Amusement Park

Peggy Wu – the 10^th grader

Today is Mandy and John's memorial day. They have been a couple for a year, so they went to celebrate together on the anniversary of the day they met each other. With the shiny sun, they get to an amusement park. First, they take some easy rides like merry-go-round, etc. Mandy feels bored and asks John to take a ride with her on the roller coaster. With frightened and scared, John plucks up his courage and go frit. Accidentally, the roller coaster comes to a stop at the top ride. Both of them are shocked. Although they get off it safe and sound at last, they don't want to see such a similar thing happens anymore. Finally, they decide to watch the sunset and they kiss each other when they see the moon coming up.

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A Day in an Amusement Park

Peggy Wu – the 10^th grader

Today is an anniversary of Mandy and John for they met each other for a year. They go to an amusement park to celebrate on a shiny day. A lot of people flock in their thousands to play there. First, they take some easy rides like merry-go-round, coffee cups, bumping cars, etc. Mandy feels bored and asks John to take a ride with her on the roller coaster. With fright and scare, John still plucks up his courage and sit beside her. Accidentally, the roller coaster comes to a stop at the top. Both of them are shocked. Coming off safe and sound at last, they don't want to see such a similar thing happen anymore. Finally, they decide to watch the sunset. On a beach, they kiss each other when they see the moon coming up.