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Movie Influence (by 12^th grader)

Boyu – the 12^th grader

Nowadays, there are many movies played in theaters.  Some are adapted from best-selling, some come from true stories, and still some are mainly about family, dream, love, and so on.  For me, I think it is impossible for me to living in any kinds of life described in movies.  Based on it, everyone can fall into imagination and feel exciting.  It’s the reason why there are plenty of people watching movies.

What kinds of movie I like?  The scientific movie added to fighting plot is what I like most.  Contrary to true stories, it is a fact that I was always soaked in fiction movies which are consisted of mutant, mythology gods, or extraterrestrials.  After see the movie, I always feel delighted and enthusiastic about everything.

In my opinion, movies have brought many tears and laughs.  And some product played in movie may be come true.  For example, it is the first time that stereo projection appeared in Star Wars.  And now, there is product publicize in our world.  Maybe one day Robots can accompany me when I was old like

Bicentennial Men, and people can transform themselves from place to place immediately like hi-tech product presented to Star Trek.

Actually, since we were born, movies had brought many surprise to everyone.  When we were in childhood, cartoon movies make me laugh.  When we work in society, all of movie let us release pressure.  When we get old, movie can be a entertainment through the leisure time.  It had been continuing to carry something we never imagine.  Just wait and see what will go.

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Movie Influence (by 12^th grader)

Boyu – the 12^th grader

Nowadays, there are many movies shown in theaters.  Some are adapted from the best-selling novels, some come from true stories, and still some are mainly about families, dreams, love, and so on.  A lot of people like watching movies, and so do I.  But it is impossible for us to live in a life as described in any of these movies.  As a result, aside from feeling happy, sad, and excited, we are left something in our imagination.  It’s the reason why there are plenty of moviegoers.

As for what kinds of movie I like, I’m fond of sci-fi movies with fighting plot, especially including mutants, extraterrestrials, and mythological gods.  Every time I watch these movies, I always feel delighted and excited.  

In my opinion, movies have brought about many tears and laughters from time to time because of their superb performances and amazing plots, and even some of predictions mentioned and hi-tech devices used might come true in the coming future.  For example, it is the first time that I saw hologram appear in Star Wars years ago.  And now, there are hologram products released in the market. Maybe one day a robot called Bicentennial Man can accompany me when I’m old, and people can transfer themselves from one place to another place immediately for their business trips or whatever reasons, like what “Energize” did in Star Trek.

Since we were born, movies have brought many surprises to us.  In our childhood, cartoon movies made us laugh.  When we are in adulthood, a variety of movies will help us release pressure from work and families.  While in our old age, we spend our leisure time with whatever movies we like.  That movies have had huge and significant influence on us from cradle and grave is definitely true.  We can rest assured that in the future, increasing numbers of movies which we can’t imagine now will come out.  But we can wait and see what the influence is and how it affects us.